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Re: .
So Rosey, I'm going to try to get this done before I go to bed. :) It's a good continuation of your previous part. I do rather like it, especially ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: .
Finally got here. :P So, I did like this story. In fact, I like it so much that I don't know if I will be able to come up with ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Elephant Keeper -- pt. 1
So, Kylan, here I am, as duly promised. So, I think the first two parts of this are pretty good. You need to work on your character voice, as we ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: The Demon of the Sea
Hi Master Yoda! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be giving you a review today. I rather liked this piece. For having a 450 word limit, you have done very well. ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Checkmate
Hi iceprincess! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be reviewing your story for today. So, the premise of this is certainly very good. While chess is rather cliche for deep talk ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Death Comes to Many
Hi there! I'm just popping in to give this story a review. So, I have to say that you introduce some interesting concepts in this story. The Reapers venture close ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Blossoms of Phnom Pehn
Hi Kylan. Thought I'd stop by and give my two cents on this. It the way sugarcane break under my grip and in the way a betrothed smiles quietly at ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Mutts - Passing
Hi Gryphon. Conrad Rice here, to give you a quick review. This was a very nice story. I really liked it. Everything in it flowed very nicely. I noticed a ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Polly
Hi Kylan. This is me, dropping in for a quick review. So, you said that you thought I might like this story. And I do. It's a well written piece, ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: .
Hi Rosey! Conrad here to give you a review. I thought that this was a rather solid story. Your plot and dialogue are very well constructed, and there are no ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Down by the lake
Hi Kylan! I'm here to give your story a quick review. This has been your most appealing recent story. Your last few ones haven't really pulled at me, minus our ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: The Chronograph
Hi Etain! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. :) I love the premise of this story. It reminds me a lot of something Ray Bradbury might ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: The Grotto Of Grottos (part 1)
Hi Lil_Pau! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. :) I really liked the whimsical notions of this piece. It lead us along, little by little, with ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Green with Envy
Hi Jetpack! This is Conrad Rice again. :) By the way, I noticed your signature. Are you a Doctor Who fan? If so, I will have no choice but to ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Dinosaur in the Attic
Hi Jetpack. I'm Conrad Rice and I'll be your reviewer. :) I have to say that I really enjoyed this story. It reminds me a lot of something that Neil ...
Jul 13, 2009
